Draft 1
The structure is sharp and uses space effeciently however it is a bit boring to look at.
The columns are identicle in size which gives the page a very regimented feel. There are no pull quotes so the audience's only taste of the article comes from the title.
The title being on the left and not with the columns allows for more story space but it blocks the photo.
Both pages are quite blocky which detracts from the asthetics of the magazine. This layout is very simple and quite bland. There's nothing pulling me into the article except the picture.
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