Update 15

Update 15

 

After going through my evaluation I have a list of things I need to edit on them.

 

Question 1

• Too descriptive needs to be more analytical

Question 2

• Too submisive
• Use direct address
• How are you representing females

Question 3

• Check Spelling
• What Countries is it popular?
• Data

Question 4-5

• Vague
• Sweeping comments
• Evidence
• Audience data
• Audience feedback

Question 6

• Why used?
• How did it benefit your project